Kristen Wyatt (Kindle ePUB Pdf) Our Last Date – PDF & TXT
Crashing The Crease kLso pretty constant throughout All of the characters are funny almost to the point where I had to reread a couple places because I lost track of who said whatthey re voices were that similar Also some serious moments might have made the humor have a little punch at times I also wanted to see affection between the dadswe see someisses in the past and a brief moment of cuddling in the present but other than that there are only a smattering of some affectionate looks and that s *ItHaving Said That I *said that I Like The Family Dynamic the family dynamic Families are always a hit with me and gay dads with a Pisma Iz Zatvora De Profundis Salome kid orids is always interesting I would like to Broad And Alien Is The World know about them and see them theid is a riot and I want to now how she came to exist and how they re married and what happened with their careers they both started out as actors Also the author mentions Nate was leaving for New York from LA shortly after the first date but they never explain what happened Did he go Did they do a long distance relationship for a while There was mention of two years in there but it was unclear if they ept in contact or not or even if Nate was in NYC or LAAs for recommendationsthis is a solid read it soon and if you like family dynamics or humor in your mm fictionread it ASAP I thought that this
Was A Sweet ReadI a sweet readI loved all the witty dads daughter banter back and forth between Lizzie and her dads actually 45 stars Ah our last date with a DSP Daily Dose story for now This is a nice finish to the series although it left me curious about the couple and wondering if there would be to their story Jon and Nate are asked by their 12 year old daughter how they met and thus the story begins and not a very auspicious beginning either Jon and Nate were both actors and awoke with terrible hangovers and numerous notes and texts to themselves about some guy they met at a party Jon calls him up and invites Nate to an AIDS carnival he is attending for work and they spend the day getting to now each other only to determine that they really have nothing in common and it was a lovely last date for them let s be friendsThe story hops back and forth between. En his twelve year old daughter Lizzie nonchalantly asks for the story of his first date with his partner Nate Jon takes his family through his memory of that first day through the.
Kristen Wyatt µ 8 SummaryThe mundane family chore of preparing dinner as a family and the story of that first or rather last date for the two men It s told in present tense which might set some may not care for but once I got a few pages in it was fine for me It does however hop back and forth
BETWEEN THE PRESENT AND THE PAST AND WHILE INthe present and the past and while in past it s told as if you are there I liked that but I could see some people finding it a
BIT CONFUSING THEN AGAIN I DONconfusing Then again I don usually mind head hopping so it s a personal choice thingThe big draw here is Jon and Nate and their interactions both with each other at the carnival and with each other and their daughter It is non stop banter and innuendo and snide remarks none meant to be cruel or intentionally mean but they are well matched in that regard even if Jon was sure they are mismatched in every way that matters for a relationship I enjoyed the banter and in some ways it reminds me of my relationship with my own daughter so the child in the stories smarty pants comebacks to some of her fathers comments did not seem unusual to me and fit with her fathers personalities She sums it up Oh so you guys have always been like that Lizzie notes Bitchy about clothes And everything else Some may find it a bit grating as they rarely seem to let up on the snarky comments but there are a few moments of seriousness as Jon wonders why he feels he s letting something important go when he nows they have nothing in common and when they think about the strength of their relationship now and the family they have builtI would really like to now how they got together since they tell their daughter it was two years before they started dating It would be nice to see how that happened and how she came To Be In Their be in their I did find myself chuckling a few times at their dialog which is uick and spicy but sometimes it also made me tired and maybe a little seriousness inserted might have left me reeling a little less from trying to eep up with them However it was a cute light finish to the Daily Dose series with a nice happily ever after ending sweet fun story about how they meet in a funny way telling their daughter. Hangover the carnival the certainty that he could never fall for someone like Nate and how Nate managed to unsettle everything Jon thought he new in the course of a single afternoo. I hope this is not the only time we get to meet Jon and Nate They have a story to tell and it is not done yet Our Last Date is a sweet funny and cute family story about two men telling the story of their first date to their twelve year old daughterMy problem with
THIS WAS THAT I WOULD VE WANTED THE WHOLEwas that I would ve wanted THE WHOLE IT S EVEN STATED WHAT HAPPENS WHOLE story It s even stated what happens the first date but never getting the details annoyed me I found the bickering couple such a fun thing and then when I didn t get the whole story I was bummedOf course I now this was a short story and as a writer I Innocent Deceptions know how much it limits what you have time to tell but stillAnyway I still really liked it a lot mostly because I m on a family story stint at the moment Oh and there s no sex in this story so if that s a dealbreaker for you thought you shouldnow Nice story about two very different men meeting and not remembering it The fun that follows as they try to recall what happened is hilarious Since it is told in past tense there is no real tension as to how they
End Up But Theirup but their and forth is uite entertainingIf you like stories with humor and a family angle you will probably like this one This story surprised me a little bitand honestly it was in a good wayI was unprepared for the humor that infused the story The daughter was cute as hell and funny enough to hold her own with two humorous dads There are some pretty good banter moments and jokes galoreBut this short is not just fluff there is some meat to the story The premise is a flashback to the first or last which needs to be understood in context of the story so I ll refrain from explaining and spoiling date The date itself was actually pretty well done broken up by jumps to the present that broke up the action and lent itself to some funny commentary A drunken hookup and date setup for the day after is a funny idea and leads to some comic moments I wish the author would have played a little with the fact that they didn t now each other specifically that moment when they first meet again face to face Despite that though the story is well doneA couple of nigglesthe comedy while pretty hilarious is Part of the First Time For Everything Daily Dose 2011 collectionIt’s a uestion every couple answers at some point “How did you guys meet” Yet it takes Jon Nunez by surprise wh.